Industry and Audience essay Learner Response

Daniel GCSE Media – Industries, Internet and Audiences essay learner response – December 2019

Post this in a new blogpost on your Media blog called ‘Industry and Audience essay Learner Response’ then complete the LR tasks/questions below. 

Audience essay feedback:

WWW:

·         Some ability to write a sustained essay that argues a viewpoint for example a clear and concise introduction and conclusion

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·         Some ability to comment on the three traditional types of media industries e.g. music, film and television and print and how the internet has impacted these

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EBI:

·         Lacking specific examples of how the internet has impacted audiences. Look back at your plan to identify examples for each industry changing

·         Lacking enough connectives to connect each paragraph together. Consider removing the sub-headings and instead constantly linking it back to the statement

LR: see GCSE Media Year 1 blog

2) What was the word count for your essay?
524

3) What was your strongest paragraph? Why do you think it was better than others?
Music industry is in my opinion my strongest paragraph as it is in a lot depth


3) What was your weakest paragraph? Why do you think it wasn't as good as others?
Newspaper industry is in my opinion my weakest paragraph as it is in didn't include enough about the disadvantages

5) How can you improve your extended writing in GCSE Media Studies in future?
By going more in depth

6) Write ONE thing you have learned about the internet, audience and industry from completing this essay.
That the audience have gain a whole lot of power due to the rise in technology that in the past