October assessment learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).
I got 22/25 a grade 7

2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question:

Q1: 0 Didn't achieve full marks as it says denotes
Q2: 1
Q3: 2
Q4: 2
Q5: 2
Q6: 3
Q7: 2
Q8: 4
Q9: 6 Didn't achieve full marks i didn't write more points

Where you didn't achieve full marks, write WHY you think you missed out on the extra marks. Use the indicative content suggestions in the mark scheme to help with this.

3) Did you get any media terminology wrong in the assessment? Make a note of it here for future revision: con notates

4) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question?
Q4 as i stated the type of shot it is and showed the writers intention

5) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question?
i scored low on question 1 as i got confused by denotes and connotes

6) Re-draft your answer to Q9 and type it out in full. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure your typed re-draft is a top-level answer of at least three paragraphs. 

Charities use pictures of children in their advertising to show the struggle of their lives it is also controversial and the child is associated with innocence and vulnerability. This makes the consumer feel sympathy as the child is in this conditions.

The raindrop on the left could denote the child is thirsty and doesn't have basic need. It could also represent purity and how donating might make them happy and get this needs.Even the typography is white and bold which denotes purity and how it could please the children.

You can tell the target audience know what its about as its a global issue and associated with particular places in world.